Let me give you credit, for your first project.... this is an amazingly developed story. I'll save any critiques because quite honestly anything that could be critiqued is minor at best and takes absolutely nothing away from what you've created.
The story every step of the way through your initial chapter releases has been beautiful. Obvious at a lot of steps, but in a very positive way. Certain times you simply just know what's coming up and feel satisfied when it does.
Every character is properly grown and included into the story as well as the subtle but thoughtful ways you've tied them to the mc. Your story may be one of the very rare times, probably the only time, where I haven't been able to lock on to a single character, (I'm personally a very monogamous person, so I tend to always find one character and never deviate in a story) nor did I find any issues in being able to empathize/like each one. (although having a decent amount of experiences dating nurses, I am quite wary of Sarah lol)
I'm going to end this here because honestly I could spend an entire page worth of scrolling praising you for the emotional depths, transitions and flow of your story and I'm sure people don't have a month to read a single review.
Amazing job, and I truly hope you'll continue with this development and keep true to your vision with it because in just what you've given so far... It's become one of my most favorite next to Leap of Faith.
Have just completed my playthrough of "The Missing Part" after having been made aware of it's existence via Wibble's glowing review and I'm floored. Bravo! Amazing job so far!
Beautiful and heartbreaking storytelling, dialogue that flows smoothly while being captivating and comfortable to read. Interesting and fleshed out characters as well as good renders. I can't believe this is all new to you. Talk about raw talent.
(Sarah is amazing, I can't WAIT for the connection she unknowingly shares with MC to be revealed)
Reading your devlog with further information I'm 100% on board with your vision for the game as something I want to see, play and support the development of. You can expect a new patron in the next couple of days and I'll do my best to spread the word of this title.
Hello DEV, I've read here and there that the game has potential and that the story is on the right track and the renders look great, now In order to give the game a chance and so on, I have an important question, which is: In the end, will it have a Harem, yes or no?
How the realationships will turn out in the end is something that I consider a spoiler and because of that won't make public, I'm sorry. If this is important for you then the answer at this point in time is no. No harem.
Hello there , I just read a few thing you post about you and the game , lets say I'm absolutely amazed by your work. The games is incredibly good for a solo project. So far the main 3 love interests are really well-written, I suggest you can just focus all on the main girls and cut out side character content to reduces your workloads. But anyways suit your self the way you want to. Just want to say I like the game and will support if I can, keep it up!
I really loved the game and I won't say much except that it made me shed a few tears, which is hard for me, and I kept going with the development, happy belated Christmas haha
Great start to your game! I was thrilled to finally come across a newly released AVN with meaningful dialogue. I played a couple of other newly released AVNs this week and was frustrated by their bland, lifeless writing. However, the dialogue in your game is packed with strong emotions and depth. By the way, will this game only feature the three main love interests, or do you plan to add more side characters in the future?
Hi and thanks for the positive comment. With the main love interests it is currently more likely that it will stay with the three. At least for the first couple of chapters. Many games that I have enjoyed playing have suffered from having too many choices after a while. Due to the fact that you are limited in development time, it is simply not possible to deliver enough content per update to have too many main interests, especially if you are a solo developer like me. I have planned for side characters, but I'm still undecided about when exactly they will come into action, as the beginning of the story revolves around the low point of the mc and intimate encounters with random characters make little sense in terms of the narrative.
Hi dev, just played your prologue and decided to support you on Patreon because you made me cry. Really fucked up my feels, and I loved it! Can't wait for chapter 1
Hi Dev, reading the description I see that you say that starting from chapter 1 there will be choices, what about tags or content can you give some information about that? and also kinks/fetishes will be avoidable (they don't happen in the story depending on the player's choice), skippable (they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene), forced by plot?
For example, I have no interest in lesbian/femdom scenes if the game were to have that, can I avoid it or should some of the LI be avoided to avoid that?
Hi. Thanks for your questions. When I have more information about the specific tags, I will happily update them accordingly. With regard to fetishes, the examples mentioned will not occur. I can't predict every mature encounter at this moment that will happen until the end of the game, as I have concentrated on the story itself for the time being. In general, no characters/fetishes will be forced on the player. But at this moment I can guarantee that there will be no such things as ntr, futa/trans or femdom because I personally don’t have any interest in that.
Up to a certain point, the game can be played with the main interests in parallel or only with one of them. The compulsion to choose at least one comes from the fact that the story mainly revolves around the development of the mc in interaction with at least one female main interest.
There is an in-game Walkthrough that will be available to set to “on” in the games settings starting from chapter 1 that will guide you through things in more detail if you wish to activate it.
you say no ntr, but many devs have a blind delusion of what that means, so let me ask you, will any of those lis get fucked by someone else than the mc (be it in text or otherwise) or those lis only will ever be with the mc or no one (meaning that even if the mc don't pursue a li, she will never be mentioned or shown with someone else ever).
"The Mc’s/your dick is and will always be the only one on screen"
Just to make sure, neither are they fucked offscreen or mentioned in text they fucked someone else either, right? Because saying "on screen" makes it seems like the lis may fuck other guys offscreen or something.
You also need to add information about the game to let players know. As of right now the description is mostly about you. Just letting you know before you get rude comments.
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Let me give you credit, for your first project.... this is an amazingly developed story. I'll save any critiques because quite honestly anything that could be critiqued is minor at best and takes absolutely nothing away from what you've created.
The story every step of the way through your initial chapter releases has been beautiful. Obvious at a lot of steps, but in a very positive way. Certain times you simply just know what's coming up and feel satisfied when it does.
Every character is properly grown and included into the story as well as the subtle but thoughtful ways you've tied them to the mc. Your story may be one of the very rare times, probably the only time, where I haven't been able to lock on to a single character, (I'm personally a very monogamous person, so I tend to always find one character and never deviate in a story) nor did I find any issues in being able to empathize/like each one. (although having a decent amount of experiences dating nurses, I am quite wary of Sarah lol)
I'm going to end this here because honestly I could spend an entire page worth of scrolling praising you for the emotional depths, transitions and flow of your story and I'm sure people don't have a month to read a single review.
Amazing job, and I truly hope you'll continue with this development and keep true to your vision with it because in just what you've given so far... It's become one of my most favorite next to Leap of Faith.
Hello,
Have just completed my playthrough of "The Missing Part" after having been made aware of it's existence via Wibble's glowing review and I'm floored. Bravo! Amazing job so far!
Beautiful and heartbreaking storytelling, dialogue that flows smoothly while being captivating and comfortable to read. Interesting and fleshed out characters as well as good renders. I can't believe this is all new to you. Talk about raw talent.
(Sarah is amazing, I can't WAIT for the connection she unknowingly shares with MC to be revealed)
Reading your devlog with further information I'm 100% on board with your vision for the game as something I want to see, play and support the development of. You can expect a new patron in the next couple of days and I'll do my best to spread the word of this title.
Hello,
Just wanted to say thank you. This is an amazing game and I loved every minute of it. Great job!
That said, I think something's weird with Sarah's lips (especially in the scene where she wears makeup).
Hello DEV, I've read here and there that the game has potential and that the story is on the right track and the renders look great, now In order to give the game a chance and so on, I have an important question, which is: In the end, will it have a Harem, yes or no?
Hello. You can find the information that I can and want to share on topics as the one you mentioned in here: https://jpk-vns.itch.io/the-missing-part/devlog/843987/the-missing-part-from-sta...
How the realationships will turn out in the end is something that I consider a spoiler and because of that won't make public, I'm sorry. If this is important for you then the answer at this point in time is no. No harem.
Hello there , I just read a few thing you post about you and the game , lets say I'm absolutely amazed by your work. The games is incredibly good for a solo project. So far the main 3 love interests are really well-written, I suggest you can just focus all on the main girls and cut out side character content to reduces your workloads. But anyways suit your self the way you want to. Just want to say I like the game and will support if I can, keep it up!
Fantastic job dev looking forward for this game
GREAT STORY! Very well written, definitely gets into your feelings. Look forward to the next update.
I really loved the game and I won't say much except that it made me shed a few tears, which is hard for me, and I kept going with the development, happy belated Christmas haha
Great start to your game! I was thrilled to finally come across a newly released AVN with meaningful dialogue. I played a couple of other newly released AVNs this week and was frustrated by their bland, lifeless writing. However, the dialogue in your game is packed with strong emotions and depth. By the way, will this game only feature the three main love interests, or do you plan to add more side characters in the future?
Hi and thanks for the positive comment. With the main love interests it is currently more likely that it will stay with the three. At least for the first couple of chapters. Many games that I have enjoyed playing have suffered from having too many choices after a while. Due to the fact that you are limited in development time, it is simply not possible to deliver enough content per update to have too many main interests, especially if you are a solo developer like me. I have planned for side characters, but I'm still undecided about when exactly they will come into action, as the beginning of the story revolves around the low point of the mc and intimate encounters with random characters make little sense in terms of the narrative.
Interesting game, but damn.......... what a heavy prologue.
You almost made me cry.
Hi dev, just played your prologue and decided to support you on Patreon because you made me cry. Really fucked up my feels, and I loved it! Can't wait for chapter 1
Happy to hear that.
Hi Dev, reading the description I see that you say that starting from chapter 1 there will be choices, what about tags or content can you give some information about that? and also kinks/fetishes will be avoidable (they don't happen in the story depending on the player's choice), skippable (they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene), forced by plot?
For example, I have no interest in lesbian/femdom scenes if the game were to have that, can I avoid it or should some of the LI be avoided to avoid that?
Thank you, good luck.
Hi. Thanks for your questions. When I have more information about the specific tags, I will happily update them accordingly. With regard to fetishes, the examples mentioned will not occur. I can't predict every mature encounter at this moment that will happen until the end of the game, as I have concentrated on the story itself for the time being. In general, no characters/fetishes will be forced on the player. But at this moment I can guarantee that there will be no such things as ntr, futa/trans or femdom because I personally don’t have any interest in that.
Up to a certain point, the game can be played with the main interests in parallel or only with one of them. The compulsion to choose at least one comes from the fact that the story mainly revolves around the development of the mc in interaction with at least one female main interest.
There is an in-game Walkthrough that will be available to set to “on” in the games settings starting from chapter 1 that will guide you through things in more detail if you wish to activate it.
you say no ntr, but many devs have a blind delusion of what that means, so let me ask you, will any of those lis get fucked by someone else than the mc (be it in text or otherwise) or those lis only will ever be with the mc or no one (meaning that even if the mc don't pursue a li, she will never be mentioned or shown with someone else ever).
The answer to that and much more can be found here: https://jpk-vns.itch.io/the-missing-part/devlog/843987/the-missing-part-from-sta...
Short answer. No ntr in any form.
"The Mc’s/your dick is and will always be the only one on screen"
Just to make sure, neither are they fucked offscreen or mentioned in text they fucked someone else either, right?
Because saying "on screen" makes it seems like the lis may fuck other guys offscreen or something.
No offscreen fuckerino involved, no.
You also need to add information about the game to let players know. As of right now the description is mostly about you. Just letting you know before you get rude comments.
Thanks for the tip.